Since planning our film opening we have been committed to ensuring a great story is relayed through visuals which are appropriate for the situation and exemplify our knowledge on production techniques.
Given feedback from peers, we have decided to change the way which we present our film title, our first concept was to feature the title within a shot which is of a table and has rulers on it. We have decided to change it to the title on a black screen instead, where the title would be differentiated from the composition and aids in the separation of the two scenes in the concept we have developed to show a partial climatic scene followed by a scene which develops the character and conflict experienced throughout the film.
We also thought of possibly tying the character in the garage/kidnapping scene as it would emphasize the intense situation. After thinking over and trying to conceptualize the scene, we decided to forego this decision as it would inhibit the character from interacting in the messy space and would not allow for the development of conflict in the story. This decision would also be an issue in continuity as the scene would continue and would force us to explain greater details with a limited time-frame of our two minutes, we would have to sacrifice parts of the other scene.
Through changes in our storyboard we have addressed the issues and perspectives brought up by peers and will aid in developing a great film opening, this will allow our opening to flow between scenes and create distinction between the situation the character faces versus the situation the character idolizes, which is key for developing the conflict present throughout the film.
*The actual storyboard shots were erased and we edited it by writing that the background is black, we also drew a shot of tied up hands, this shot was later erased
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